First off, massive apologies for not commenting to this sooner, I've been bogged down lately with things and other than posting my own, Remix kind of slipped my mind.

Second off, omigosh, omigosh, this was wonderful. Loved how you took everything in different, sometimes totally opposite directions but brought it back, loved the real beauty of the language, how you brought in the feeling-versus-apathy thing and-- just everything was really great. Thank you so much.