Oh my god. I really have nothing to say about this story, because it was SO amazing that my brain has ceased to function. I wrote the original story what seems like ages ago, and reading this just brought back vividly the love I used to have for the Gundam Wing 'verse.
At first, I thought that it was little!Treize's namesake who was talking, but then there was the moment of epiphany when I realized that it was really Zechs' son. That just bowled me over and *guh* am I a sucker for kiddie!fics. I just.... WOW! I love the WHOLE concept of this, and the military language that little Treize uses with such childish innocence. It's a wonderful juxtaposition, and I can really see the little boy learning to talk and think in that manner thanks to his father.
The ending was especially heartwrenching for me, how Treize's understanding of what's happening is filtered through his childish perceptions. The shared moment between him and Zechs, even while his dad is thinking of the older Treize was such a sweet and poignant moment.
I could not have asked for a better remix for one of my stories, so thank you SO much for writing this. *loves* Despite this lengthy rambling comment, I really have no words. *is floored*
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At first, I thought that it was little!Treize's namesake who was talking, but then there was the moment of epiphany when I realized that it was really Zechs' son. That just bowled me over and *guh* am I a sucker for kiddie!fics. I just.... WOW! I love the WHOLE concept of this, and the military language that little Treize uses with such childish innocence. It's a wonderful juxtaposition, and I can really see the little boy learning to talk and think in that manner thanks to his father.
The ending was especially heartwrenching for me, how Treize's understanding of what's happening is filtered through his childish perceptions. The shared moment between him and Zechs, even while his dad is thinking of the older Treize was such a sweet and poignant moment.
I could not have asked for a better remix for one of my stories, so thank you SO much for writing this. *loves* Despite this lengthy rambling comment, I really have no words. *is floored*