I love the structure you've used to tell the story, the way you revel the details step by step.
That's what I was hoping to do so I'm glad it worked for you.

Such a desolate piece, and yet, somehow, there's hope, they have each other
Oh I'm so glad that came through. I wanted it to be a kind of us against the world thing because most of their life is very much like that.

Thanks so much!