Animated Star Trek reference! Yay! You had a lot of terrific lines; my favorite was "And I didn't know that when a woman flirts with me, it always means she wants to kill me." It's depressingly true and makes him wonder about Katie. There's something about him and women. They take his ZPMs and then leave him to die. Or something like that. LOL! I loved the way you gave Rodney another imaginary companion to keep him from dying.

I was sort of confused by "You tell me," John says quietly, amusement stripped from her voice. her?