Hello there, mystery writer! Just to let you know, I am thrilled almost beyond words with how you interpreted the original drabble set! (((hugs))) I love how you fleshed out the drabbles, filling in between the spaces, drawing out the story from the framework. This indeed, is the ideal director's cut for the original story. :-)
I like how you echo the original format too, using the lyrics from "Bone In My Ear" for headings, and how you made each section reflect them. Just as an aside, I was considering using these as well, in the original "Looking Right Past", but decided on using the ones from "Spring Song." So I'm tickled pink that you found a way to use the "Bone In My Ear" lyrics. And I really like the foreshadowing at the end, with "summer's in decline": this is very much how I see it too. *nods in earnest*
So, my biggest congratulations and huzzahs! on a very lovely piece well done, and I shall be squeeing and gurgling in my own LJ. Thank you so very much! I am a very lucky person. :-)
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I like how you echo the original format too, using the lyrics from "Bone In My Ear" for headings, and how you made each section reflect them. Just as an aside, I was considering using these as well, in the original "Looking Right Past", but decided on using the ones from "Spring Song." So I'm tickled pink that you found a way to use the "Bone In My Ear" lyrics. And I really like the foreshadowing at the end, with "summer's in decline": this is very much how I see it too. *nods in earnest*
So, my biggest congratulations and huzzahs! on a very lovely piece well done, and I shall be squeeing and gurgling in my own LJ. Thank you so very much! I am a very lucky person. :-)