My favourite line: "Of course I was trying to use the Cruciatus on you, Potter. I've always wanted to see you writhe." Hee.

It's lovely to read Harry/Draco written by someone who doesn't usually write the pairing because you bring a really fresh voice to it. I loved the way you wrote Draco, I could see him and his expressions through the whole thing. Mmmm, he was very yummy.

And I love how it was a story within a story - so clever. This was very run and I liked it a lot. :D