oh, i'm so glad you chose this one to remix, anon-san, because the original is one of my favorites, and you really got the spirit of it, especially those ridiculous emails. SO MUCH LOVE. *FLAILFLAIL*
SHOW WIMBLEDON WHAT IT MEANS TO BE A NATIONAL CONTENDER!!!! Momo's emails, in particular, are made of Momobuchou-volume win. THE I KEY. And talking to Echizen too late on the phone aaawwwwwww...
I apologize deeply for whatever Momoshiro said to you. That's just Kaidoh's whole job this year, isn't it? good thing he's gettin laid a lot.
and the way Ryoma's email cuts off is just perfect, because email isn't tennis, and that's how the two of them have always talked.
"I know that word!" Momoshiro declared, delighted and horrified. ASDLKJASDKFJAS. AMAZING. I want momoshiro to be my boyfriend RIGHTNOW.
Right now, the only thing making Kachirou and Katsuo live up to the Next Coming of the Golden Pair title they'd somehow acquired was their losing record. AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHADEAD. omg it's so true. POOR ICHINEN. ninen. whatever.
He hoped the next time Momoshiro got something stuck up his nose it got jammed up so far that he suffocated. oh, true love! next they shove each other around a lot.
Of course he'd won, Ryoma knew he wasn't about to lose to Tursunov. Che. Ryoma had beaten Hewitt in his fourth round Open match after all, and he was higher ranked. So. Much. Love. RYOMA. "It was a good thing Agassi was retired, because he could beat that douche too."
Fuji had told him he really missed playing Tezuka that way. Aww. This was the part where I finally caught on where you were going with this, and also I like this shot of Fuji being wistful, of missing their old team now that they've scattered into high school, etc.
A million and ten if you keep me up after Tezuka-buchou's match again. I'm so sure Ryoma is the one who just never shuts up on the phone. XD
through the park he usually avoided because of the high chance of Inui-related run-ins, aksdfaslkfjaslfjaa AND THEN KAIDOH SHOWS UP. GLORIOUS. AHHAHAHHAA.
"You didn't stretch properly before you left," Kaidoh said, oh, Kaidoh. I love the way that this fic, like the original, is not really about Kaidoh, except for the part where it totally is. Kaidoh trying to be a good senpai to Ryoma is such love, and also the insight into the fact that he actually was upset about Inui, whereas in the original Inui doesn't ever see it.
You're thirteen and got all the way to the quarterfinals of a Grand Slam and lost to Federer, the number one tennis player in the world. YOU ARE MAGIC. because you just took the most cracked out part of canon and made it totally plausible. This whole paragraph killed me from beginning to end, Kaidoh knowing all this, and forcing Ryoma to admit that he's really giving up and being a jerk because he's scared.
"Who likes it?" Kaidoh asked. "No one's leaving you behind. I thought-- I thought it was going to happen to me, too, but it didn't. So stop being an ass." OH. OH OH OH. *TODDLERFIST* KAIDOH. He's so terse and grumpy and senpai and sweet and BLUNT. ILU KAIDOH.
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SHOW WIMBLEDON WHAT IT MEANS TO BE A NATIONAL CONTENDER!!!!
Momo's emails, in particular, are made of Momobuchou-volume win. THE I KEY. And talking to Echizen too late on the phone aaawwwwwww...
I apologize deeply for whatever Momoshiro said to you.
That's just Kaidoh's whole job this year, isn't it? good thing he's gettin laid a lot.
and the way Ryoma's email cuts off is just perfect, because email isn't tennis, and that's how the two of them have always talked.
"I know that word!" Momoshiro declared, delighted and horrified.
ASDLKJASDKFJAS. AMAZING. I want momoshiro to be my boyfriend RIGHTNOW.
Right now, the only thing making Kachirou and Katsuo live up to the Next Coming of the Golden Pair title they'd somehow acquired was their losing record.
AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHADEAD. omg it's so true. POOR ICHINEN. ninen. whatever.
He hoped the next time Momoshiro got something stuck up his nose it got jammed up so far that he suffocated.
oh, true love! next they shove each other around a lot.
Of course he'd won, Ryoma knew he wasn't about to lose to Tursunov. Che. Ryoma had beaten Hewitt in his fourth round Open match after all, and he was higher ranked.
So. Much. Love. RYOMA. "It was a good thing Agassi was retired, because he could beat that douche too."
Fuji had told him he really missed playing Tezuka that way.
Aww. This was the part where I finally caught on where you were going with this, and also I like this shot of Fuji being wistful, of missing their old team now that they've scattered into high school, etc.
A million and ten if you keep me up after Tezuka-buchou's match again.
I'm so sure Ryoma is the one who just never shuts up on the phone. XD
through the park he usually avoided because of the high chance of Inui-related run-ins,
aksdfaslkfjaslfjaa AND THEN KAIDOH SHOWS UP. GLORIOUS. AHHAHAHHAA.
"You didn't stretch properly before you left," Kaidoh said,
oh, Kaidoh. I love the way that this fic, like the original, is not really about Kaidoh, except for the part where it totally is. Kaidoh trying to be a good senpai to Ryoma is such love, and also the insight into the fact that he actually was upset about Inui, whereas in the original Inui doesn't ever see it.
"Yeah, Fuji-senpai told me," Ryoma interrupted.
JEALOUS. Oh Ryoma, sweetie. ♥♥♥
You're thirteen and got all the way to the quarterfinals of a Grand Slam and lost to Federer, the number one tennis player in the world.
YOU ARE MAGIC. because you just took the most cracked out part of canon and made it totally plausible. This whole paragraph killed me from beginning to end, Kaidoh knowing all this, and forcing Ryoma to admit that he's really giving up and being a jerk because he's scared.
"Who likes it?" Kaidoh asked. "No one's leaving you behind. I thought-- I thought it was going to happen to me, too, but it didn't. So stop being an ass."
OH. OH OH OH. *TODDLERFIST* KAIDOH. He's so terse and grumpy and senpai and sweet and BLUNT. ILU KAIDOH.