Thank you thank you, secret Remix author! Your choice of this one is something of a pleasant surprise.
I really like this - the change in setting works very well, I think, because it rather cleverly creates a whole subtle shift in tone, and combines nicely with the POV shift. I like the title change, too. =)
Right, off for a re-read! I'm really quite fascinated by this. Thank you once again!
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Thank you thank you, secret Remix author! Your choice of this one is something of a pleasant surprise.
I really like this - the change in setting works very well, I think, because it rather cleverly creates a whole subtle shift in tone, and combines nicely with the POV shift. I like the title change, too. =)
Right, off for a re-read! I'm really quite fascinated by this. Thank you once again!