ext_710 ([identity profile] siegeofangels.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remix_redux 2007-04-22 06:42 pm (UTC)

Things I really really love about this:

- how Lorne is the calm nougatey center of Atlantis, the guy who holds things together when everybody (the nuts, ahaha) are going crazy. How he's checking up on everybody because sometimes people like John Sheppard really do need someone looking after them.

- the way I giggle inappropriately at watching two dots have sex

- the sense of everybody on Atlantis knowing everybody else's business--when I wrote the original I was entirely sure that Elizabeth knew what had happened offworld, and here it's Lorne knowing about both the offworld stuff and the John/Elizabeth stuff. There are never any secrets in that city.

- how by involving Lorne you show how the repercussions of the story affect so many people--him diverting the security patrol is awesome. The original was kind of narrowly focused, and this widens the scope and, and, I love it.

- can I say again how much I love Lorne as the guardian angel here? And squee in an undignified manner?

SQUEE.

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