I'm glad you liked the spin I took of it! I like bleak and grimy and crime fiction -- perhaps I watch too much CSI myself?

It was really great to see all what you have written; you are so talented and I had a great time reading through everything you had written and trying to pick. I picked this story because I saw a way to take your beautiful language and twist it into something of my own.

I'm so, so glad you enjoyed!