naotalba ([identity profile] naotalba.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remix_redux 2007-04-23 12:23 am (UTC)

Wow. I really liked this.

he’s got enough brine in his blood to turn pirate for a pretty piece of quim
This is exactly how I imagine Jack thinks.

Will blushes like the boy he is and invokes the name Elizabeth.
Jack thinks of a shipbuilder laying a silver coin beneath the mast to preserve his ship from storms.

What a perfect image, continuing the metaphor while furthering the story in such a beautiful way.

the meridian where a swordsmith’s pale flesh has become a pirate’s tanned hide
Great visual - it rings so true.

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