Wow! I didn't even think of someone remixing this story, and look at what you've done with it! Love the growth across the years and the depth you've put into their relationship. I'm sort of lacking in coherence at the moment, for which I really apologise, because I'm sure there's more I should be saying other than, you know, wow! and thank you!

Much love. Can't wait to find out who you are writing things like this!