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2007-04-23 12:36 am (UTC)
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*Great* style:
Dean holding it together only with a silver bullet grin and an arsenal of anger and a handful of words
The lie poured out of his mouth like demon smoke
he thinks about all the cultures where shaving means starting over, becoming someone new.
pleasure arcing through his veins, strong and fast as a bullet and shattering him like glass, until it's only Dean keeping him together.
Excellent expansion of an excellent story.
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Dean holding it together only with a silver bullet grin and an arsenal of anger and a handful of words
The lie poured out of his mouth like demon smoke
he thinks about all the cultures where shaving means starting over, becoming someone new.
pleasure arcing through his veins, strong and fast as a bullet and shattering him like glass, until it's only Dean keeping him together.
Excellent expansion of an excellent story.