This is a great piece. I love the way you drew so many things together, and how perfectly in character you kept them. The highlight for me, though, was the vivid detail. I loved the way the things in Fred's apartment were so real - little details like the mascara-smudged tissue - and I could really picture them in my mind, which is unusual for me (I'm not much of a visual person, as a rule).

Great fic! Thanks!