Oh my GOD. You have no idea how much I ADORE THIS. I love LOVE the opening paragraph, for the very narcissistic purpose that it sounds just like the way I'd open a story, but god it's just so perfectly fitting. James! I love the way you've written him. He was gloriously good fun to write but seeing what Remus thought of him the whole time is just marvellous.
Speaking of which, ahhhfjkjf your Remus. Oh god. I want to jump on him or hit him with pillows or something, he's just adorable. I love that you've got across the playfulness of this so well - better than I did in the original. Oh my god the celery! I don't know what on earth was going on in yours, or James's mind, but it's just fantastic. I laughed myself sick :D :D
I LOVE THAT JAMES CALLS REMUS 'MOONBOY'. Hahaha. Oh I love that Remus is just so completely completely gay for James in this. It's beautiful. Ahhh I love it. I love you. lsdlk I love the way you've kept so much of the dialogue and mixed it in with glorious little bits of your own aldslkf ahhh :D :D
You are clearly a genius. A mad, wonderful genius. <3
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Oh my GOD. You have no idea how much I ADORE THIS. I love LOVE the opening paragraph, for the very narcissistic purpose that it sounds just like the way I'd open a story, but god it's just so perfectly fitting. James! I love the way you've written him. He was gloriously good fun to write but seeing what Remus thought of him the whole time is just marvellous.
Speaking of which, ahhhfjkjf your Remus. Oh god. I want to jump on him or hit him with pillows or something, he's just adorable. I love that you've got across the playfulness of this so well - better than I did in the original. Oh my god the celery! I don't know what on earth was going on in yours, or James's mind, but it's just fantastic. I laughed myself sick :D :D
I LOVE THAT JAMES CALLS REMUS 'MOONBOY'. Hahaha. Oh I love that Remus is just so completely completely gay for James in this. It's beautiful. Ahhh I love it. I love you. lsdlk I love the way you've kept so much of the dialogue and mixed it in with glorious little bits of your own aldslkf ahhh :D :D
You are clearly a genius. A mad, wonderful genius. <3