ext_11055 ([identity profile] typicrobots.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remix_redux 2007-04-23 02:38 am (UTC)

Oooh, what a great twist of POV! I love it!

and he can only tell something's wrong because he's spent over seven years learning her face and the grace of her body.
This line especially is lovely.

Thanks so much!

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