Someone wrote in [community profile] remix_redux 2007-04-24 06:20 pm (UTC)

Sorry, I don't have a livejournal account. ^_^

What a neat twist on the original story! The parallels came together after I finished it, so I read it again to fully appreciate what you've done here. Aeryn could've easily become Crais, though her motivations would have been different. But their love for Talyn was equal, as was their base selves. It's really cool how you've shadowed those points by switching their roles. I'm very interested in how Aeryn Sun began chasing John Crichton, what act drove her to declare Crais irreversibly contaminated?

This passage here:
There's nothing more to say, and Aeryn nods slightly before drifting back to sleep. It occurs to John, how very different this moment is from the last time they were alone, nearly an arm's length apart. Then, they were separated by one of Moya's cell doors, tension in both their shoulders and tears running unchecked down his cheeks.

Was such a poignant scene between Crichton and Crais on the show, it really makes me want to see how it would've played out with Aeryn on the other side of that cell, and how her reactions would've differed from Crais.

To sum up, very cool remix. ^_^

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