Oh this was just *delightful*! What a great idea for a Remix, and gosh, I loved this whole thing for being so very much like a comic! I loved Emma, here, and she's my favorite character so I was *thrilled* that you worked her into the story, Mystery Author! ::claps gleefully::

I loved the Ororo/Emma also--unexpected and a great twist as to why Emma would have had the number for Scott's cell-phone. Gosh, this is just wonderful, thank you so much! I really love it!!