Oh! Oh! Oh! I love how this story wraps around the original but then a tendril curls off, revealing more while staying true to what I started. It's wonderful; makes me ache with happiness.
Veronica seeing Cassidy, Mac having nightmares: makes so much sense. And the way Veronica can't think about her dad yet is spot-on.
If not for Mac. If not for the one person left who knew the old Veronica, the Veronica who had a pretty great life. Who loved a lot of people that were alive. Who drove a shiny car around and snapped pictures of cheating husbands. That Veronica is as dead as Cassidy -- as dead as Logan -- as dead as --
As dead as sleep.
*sniffles*
Thank you for showing me what Veronica was thinking and feeling.
Mac's hand finds hers and they hold hands like small children as the concrete ribbon unrolls in front of them. The beating of their hearts is the only sound.
Don't apologize - I *love* this. I'm a big sap. *draws hearts all around your remix*
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Veronica seeing Cassidy, Mac having nightmares: makes so much sense. And the way Veronica can't think about her dad yet is spot-on.
If not for Mac. If not for the one person left who knew the old Veronica, the Veronica who had a pretty great life. Who loved a lot of people that were alive. Who drove a shiny car around and snapped pictures of cheating husbands. That Veronica is as dead as Cassidy -- as dead as Logan -- as dead as --
As dead as sleep.
*sniffles*
Thank you for showing me what Veronica was thinking and feeling.
Mac's hand finds hers and they hold hands like small children as the concrete ribbon unrolls in front of them. The beating of their hearts is the only sound.
Don't apologize - I *love* this. I'm a big sap. *draws hearts all around your remix*