This is amazing! My mind is whirling with all the possibilities.
That last sentence, with Harry, is so perfectly confusing in it's Time-twisted way.

I love the invented spell--brilliant! Genius!
And all four "moments" so perfectly intertwined, and not really all that confusing. A really good blend of each moment within the Big one. And, once again, that ending line. *speechless*

I feel doubly honoured that my story received this exceptional treatment; and guilty, for I have none to offer in return.