Well, *wheww*. I'm glad you liked it. I mean, I was going to write this one anyway, but I'm glad you liked this.
The part I was especially nervous about was the changes I made in the exact sequence of events. I hoped that those readers who caught them would realize that Ryg is not the most relible of narrators, and not above changing a story to suit himself, and so look at the rest of the story with somewhat of a more cynical eye.
I was also worried about taking the focus off John and Chiana - I didn't have a hell of a lot of choice, the froggie was very insistent on just who was supposed to be the focus of the story! But I didn't want to be dissing the story pairing, either.
Anyway, I'm glad it pleased, and thank you for the lovely feedback! And oh - Rygel will not act like he enjoys it if you hug him. Just be warned. *g*
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The part I was especially nervous about was the changes I made in the exact sequence of events. I hoped that those readers who caught them would realize that Ryg is not the most relible of narrators, and not above changing a story to suit himself, and so look at the rest of the story with somewhat of a more cynical eye.
I was also worried about taking the focus off John and Chiana - I didn't have a hell of a lot of choice, the froggie was very insistent on just who was supposed to be the focus of the story! But I didn't want to be dissing the story pairing, either.
Anyway, I'm glad it pleased, and thank you for the lovely feedback! And oh - Rygel will not act like he enjoys it if you hug him. Just be warned. *g*
- hg