Right, I just thought it might have been an editorial comment saying something along the lines of, "Elrond isn't a lieutenant, wtf are you talking about?"

lol But no, thank you. I do appreciate them, and have made some of the corrections you suggested here, and more to the fanfiction.net version of the fic here (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3514064/1/).

Thanks. :)