Thank you so much, sweetheart - you are such a star for your amazing, insightful reviews. ::hugs::

So glad you liked it and the characters; I've not written much of any of them, so it's always a challenge that I'm happy to hear came out okay. (Though I'll admit that the "pleasure of mating" line is directly taken from the original, as is the wont of the remixer to steal the best lines from the original, heh!)