ext_13064 ([identity profile] fmanalyst.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remix_redux 2007-04-30 06:51 pm (UTC)

I love it too. It pulled me out of the insomniac funk I was in during the night. A quick editing note: In this paragraph, I think you mean tangible.

We left Kira and Momo at their respective Division houses and walked back to the Tenth together. The moon, though not full, was very bright, and it tinted everything white and silver. It made the Captain's hair seemed brighter, made his power seem more managible, and it took me a moment to figure out why.

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