I agree with Miss Elle - the way you picked up Sam's POV is really an awesome counterpoint to the original, and I love that they both have these little nursery-rhyme rituals, because it's so them to be doing exactly the same thing without realizing the other is doing it, without talking about it or anything. Excellent work.
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I agree with Miss Elle - the way you picked up Sam's POV is really an awesome counterpoint to the original, and I love that they both have these little nursery-rhyme rituals, because it's so them to be doing exactly the same thing without realizing the other is doing it, without talking about it or anything. Excellent work.