not only is this beautiful, it's so true to the original that I wasn't sure at first what had changed. I see from the comments, that it was the point of view. I'll have to go back and read the original, which I loved, and compare the two. But I love how you use the falling imagery repeatedly to organize the piece, and I wonder if that's also a nod to the original's structure, or just to the title.
in any event, very well done indeed. I look forward to seeing who you are tomorrow. Or, later today.
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Date: 2007-04-29 08:58 am (UTC)in any event, very well done indeed. I look forward to seeing who you are tomorrow. Or, later today.
Hob