I love the structure you've used to tell the story, the way you revel the details step by step. That's what I was hoping to do so I'm glad it worked for you.
Such a desolate piece, and yet, somehow, there's hope, they have each other Oh I'm so glad that came through. I wanted it to be a kind of us against the world thing because most of their life is very much like that.
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Date: 2007-04-29 04:20 pm (UTC)That's what I was hoping to do so I'm glad it worked for you.
Such a desolate piece, and yet, somehow, there's hope, they have each other
Oh I'm so glad that came through. I wanted it to be a kind of us against the world thing because most of their life is very much like that.
Thanks so much!