My favourite line: "Of course I was trying to use the Cruciatus on you, Potter. I've always wanted to see you writhe." Hee.
It's lovely to read Harry/Draco written by someone who doesn't usually write the pairing because you bring a really fresh voice to it. I loved the way you wrote Draco, I could see him and his expressions through the whole thing. Mmmm, he was very yummy.
And I love how it was a story within a story - so clever. This was very run and I liked it a lot. :D
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Date: 2007-04-29 08:42 pm (UTC)It's lovely to read Harry/Draco written by someone who doesn't usually write the pairing because you bring a really fresh voice to it. I loved the way you wrote Draco, I could see him and his expressions through the whole thing. Mmmm, he was very yummy.
And I love how it was a story within a story - so clever. This was very run and I liked it a lot. :D