Ah, John-boy, what have you become? John-boy, what have you *done*?
What I notice about this one is that John should be victim here, completely at the mercy of the bottle, of the voices in his head, of the PK agenda - but you don't allow him that luxury - that you still hold him responsible for what he's doing to himself and to the universe.
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Date: 2007-04-26 06:25 pm (UTC)Ah, John-boy, what have you become? John-boy, what have you *done*?
What I notice about this one is that John should be victim here, completely at the mercy of the bottle, of the voices in his head, of the PK agenda - but you don't allow him that luxury - that you still hold him responsible for what he's doing to himself and to the universe.
Nicely - if horribly - done.
- hg