I adored this! "Oikos" has been one of my favs for a while now. For the first paragraph or two of this, I wasn't sure what the difference was going to be (most of the remixes I've seen have been major pov changes), but then I realized you were slanting it just differently enough to bring out the things that siriaeve implied, while pushing the things she actually said back into the background. Very delicate work, beautifully done.
Oh, and the touching was perfect. I can so see Rodney being isolated in that way and not even recognizing it.
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Date: 2007-04-24 01:49 am (UTC)Oh, and the touching was perfect. I can so see Rodney being isolated in that way and not even recognizing it.