Oh, oh wow. I'm blown away with what you did with this; it's so gorgeous. I think it's the story I wanted to write when I sat down to write 'Oikos', but just wasn't capable of. This, this has such beautiful character voices, lovely turns of phrase, and it fills out all the empty spaces in the original story. Rodney being uncomfortable with being touched, and not feeling lonely (usually) and oh, that last paragraph! I am utterly in love with that last paragraph. Thank you so, so much; this has really made me happy, and put such a smile on my face ♥
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Date: 2007-04-22 06:19 pm (UTC)