I really liked this! I love 'outsider' POV fics, and this is a great one - you explain why someone would be gutted, you give a possible explanation for the violence in that picked flower, and you draw such a crisp, sharp picture of the senselessness of it all. Great stuff!
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Date: 2007-04-23 09:49 pm (UTC)