Oh, my this is just lovely, thank you! I'm so impressed that you got two different stories in here -- especially since I reread them and I realize that my fanon on Wes liking Star Wars isn't completely consistent. But you got it all to work together in a way that fits the characters perfectly.
I love Wes gathering souvenirs at the beginning, and the interior monologues for Fred and Illyria are particularly wonderful. Illyria's reactions to the movie are particularly great -- she thinks Wesley would be proud of her for not killing annoying people in the audience! personal growth! And I just love how happy Fred is during the scene where she and Wes are watching the movie. Just great. And Fred at her prom with Leia hair! *dies*
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Date: 2007-04-22 04:04 pm (UTC)I love Wes gathering souvenirs at the beginning, and the interior monologues for Fred and Illyria are particularly wonderful. Illyria's reactions to the movie are particularly great -- she thinks Wesley would be proud of her for not killing annoying people in the audience! personal growth! And I just love how happy Fred is during the scene where she and Wes are watching the movie. Just great. And Fred at her prom with Leia hair! *dies*
Thank you, thank you, unknown remixer!