I loved the structure of the original fic - the disjointedness of it fit seamlessly with the emotional landscape of the story - but man, you've made it work so well as a more traditional narrative! I adore the meta feel of it, if that makes any sort of sense. Very well done!
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Date: 2007-04-24 06:47 pm (UTC)I loved the structure of the original fic - the disjointedness of it fit seamlessly with the emotional landscape of the story - but man, you've made it work so well as a more traditional narrative! I adore the meta feel of it, if that makes any sort of sense. Very well done!