Ooh, I love this -- judging from the concept, even though I haven't read the original, it seems like a very tricky story to remix, too. Excellent look at a young Sammy: he follows Dean's instructions and he's full of uncertainty, but he's smart and he can think on his own, too. I like how it's sort of -- vague, throughout? As in, we don't really know what's happening throughout the middle section, and we don't quite find out in the last: I like it that way. And this line is a bit heartbreaking: He checks for blood on the driveway anyway. ♥
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Date: 2007-05-02 04:05 am (UTC)