I've tried to comment on this story several times, but LJ is being evil.
*gives it another go*
I really enjoy your internal Pyro-voice. I particularly enjoy what you've added to the Rogue-Bobby-John scene, including the hint (unless I am totally imagining this?) of Rogue being jealous of Jean. Great balancing of a lot of characters.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
regna![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
(no subject)
Date: 2007-04-27 02:28 pm (UTC)*gives it another go*
I really enjoy your internal Pyro-voice. I particularly enjoy what you've added to the Rogue-Bobby-John scene, including the hint (unless I am totally imagining this?) of Rogue being jealous of Jean. Great balancing of a lot of characters.