Oh, wonderful writing. I really enjoyed this take on the 'getting out of NY' thing and you paced it beautifully, with Peter's thoughts and descriptions as careful as the first-second-third base progression. You have a lovely style and command of flow and I hope to see more of your writing in the future!
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Date: 2007-05-21 08:17 am (UTC)Memming for sheer win. ♥