God, what a feat! Wrapping so much history into such a tight, flowing story? You are very, very good!
I love the idea of Sirius's journal (and your reluctantly - but inevitably - aristocratic portrayal of Sirius). I love Remus's desperation about keeping his secret and how it slowly shifts to weariness.
All together, this was touching and brilliantly done.
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Date: 2007-04-29 08:37 pm (UTC)I love the idea of Sirius's journal (and your reluctantly - but inevitably - aristocratic portrayal of Sirius). I love Remus's desperation about keeping his secret and how it slowly shifts to weariness.
All together, this was touching and brilliantly done.