It didn't even occur to me that someone might expand this drabble, but I'm so glad you did. I like that Rodney is absolutely clueless about the implications of what he's doing, even in this extended version, and you really did capture his impatience with this sort of, er, ritualised mumbo-jumbo, I guess, very well.
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Date: 2007-04-23 06:00 am (UTC)It didn't even occur to me that someone might expand this drabble, but I'm so glad you did. I like that Rodney is absolutely clueless about the implications of what he's doing, even in this extended version, and you really did capture his impatience with this sort of, er, ritualised mumbo-jumbo, I guess, very well.
Thank you!