Wonderful, beautiful, lovely. Just wow. I really can't imagine anything more in keeping with how I'd intended my original little ficlet - but you really have extended it and given it another little breath of life that makes it sing again. :)
The twins voices in particular are just... perfect in my head, I can hear them saying all the lines you have for them. Wow.
Lovely little turns of phrase all through - "they're odd and pointy" LOL! And Ape's Snessays! Wonderful, wonderful. It's the last sentence in particular, though, just hits me right here. *gestures vaguely to chest* Fantastic.
Love and many thanks for a fabulous, wonderful remix, Lily
PS: Sorry I'm so late - I had the dates mixed up in my calender for when the archive went live and when the authors were revealed. :)
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Date: 2007-04-29 11:01 am (UTC)The twins voices in particular are just... perfect in my head, I can hear them saying all the lines you have for them. Wow.
Lovely little turns of phrase all through - "they're odd and pointy" LOL! And Ape's Snessays! Wonderful, wonderful. It's the last sentence in particular, though, just hits me right here. *gestures vaguely to chest* Fantastic.
Love and many thanks for a fabulous, wonderful remix,
Lily
PS: Sorry I'm so late - I had the dates mixed up in my calender for when the archive went live and when the authors were revealed. :)