I really, really love this. Above and beyond how brilliantly you presented the other side of the story, this works so well in its own right.
The part that fascinates me most is the limited amnesia. On and off, I've been thinking about picking this story up and continuing it, and while I had also decided John was enhanced, becoming a meta-human after the explosion, I hadn't thought he might have such limited amnesia. It's a brilliant idea though.
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Date: 2007-04-23 10:05 am (UTC)The part that fascinates me most is the limited amnesia. On and off, I've been thinking about picking this story up and continuing it, and while I had also decided John was enhanced, becoming a meta-human after the explosion, I hadn't thought he might have such limited amnesia. It's a brilliant idea though.
Thank you.
*goes to re-read*