OMG. I like cupidsbow's original and this story works seamlessly with it to present John's POV. The thought that he's aware and knows that they're looking for him, but has gone off on his own anyway, is chilling and painful. It's also IC--I could see John adopting the Pegasus Galaxy as his people, the way Mitch and Dex, and then Atlantis, were his people, and making the sacrifice for the greater good.
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Date: 2007-04-22 07:10 pm (UTC)