This is Beautiful. To have expanded so much from that drabble- this is such a lovely, flowing piece. And it's so real. Everything just fits so nicely together, and the imagery used is marvelous. As other people have said, these two lines especially just floored me: nothing is fixed that needs holding together (I absolutely love that line) and of course, "Do you feel better? Well then." Really, this was just all kinds of amazing.
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Date: 2007-04-23 12:43 am (UTC)