Beautiful! I love the way you've expanded on the drabble, and made it so right. The imagery is gorgeous, the phrasing lyrical, the loving so perfect.
It would have been like being jealous of the weather being nice in Southampton. The sun could not be directed, and Remus was merely blissfully happy when it shone on him again.
And you've certainly made me like James a whole lot better! :)
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Date: 2007-04-23 06:03 pm (UTC)It would have been like being jealous of the weather being nice in Southampton. The sun could not be directed, and Remus was merely blissfully happy when it shone on him again.
And you've certainly made me like James a whole lot better! :)